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Solitude is what i seek
when the day is on it's peak
Though most people fail to see
that this is a normal day for me
I like to spend some time alone
avoiding speaking on the phone
& please oh please dont just assume
that i'm a geek stuck in her room
I simply enjoy being at home
not having to go out and roam
Disney movies or anime
this is how my day is like
Others tell me how to behave
what is cool and what is lame
How i should go out to a club
Find a guy and then hook up
Because that is what i'm supposed to do
That's what i'm programmed to do
There's nothing wrong with being me
It's better than a wanna be
Though i do believe i want to change
But not in your odious & fake way
I may not be fancy or loud
I may ever live in my own pink cloud
But take some time & you will see
That you may end up liking me
when the day is on it's peak
Though most people fail to see
that this is a normal day for me
I like to spend some time alone
avoiding speaking on the phone
& please oh please dont just assume
that i'm a geek stuck in her room
I simply enjoy being at home
not having to go out and roam
Disney movies or anime
this is how my day is like
Others tell me how to behave
what is cool and what is lame
How i should go out to a club
Find a guy and then hook up
Because that is what i'm supposed to do
That's what i'm programmed to do
There's nothing wrong with being me
It's better than a wanna be
Though i do believe i want to change
But not in your odious & fake way
I may not be fancy or loud
I may ever live in my own pink cloud
But take some time & you will see
That you may end up liking me
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a little funny poem i happen to write this morning~
Enjoy~
p.s Please tell me what you think, i'm dying to know~
constructive critisism is super fine~
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Lovely self-portrait. (It's indeed a "user's manual" that people who like solitude could give to their family/friends circle )
I especially like the last stanza, because it gives a smiling conclusion and, by introducing this idea of being liked by a "you", cleverly "balances" the claim for solitude that opens the poem.
In the first line, shouldn't "solitute" be "solitude"?
I especially like the last stanza, because it gives a smiling conclusion and, by introducing this idea of being liked by a "you", cleverly "balances" the claim for solitude that opens the poem.
In the first line, shouldn't "solitute" be "solitude"?